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Post by GWGreturns on Dec 31, 2003 17:37:16 GMT -5
Don't quite have it completely thought through as of yet, but my Bionicle story shall commence in the next post or so. After it's done, feel free to read and comment on any crap I think of.
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Post by JCB on Dec 31, 2003 17:39:01 GMT -5
Why are you so hard on yourself?
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Post by ChaosLord on Jan 1, 2004 7:50:35 GMT -5
I'm looking forward to read it.
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Post by GWGreturns on Jan 1, 2004 10:19:07 GMT -5
Why are you so hard on yourself? I'm not. I'm just open for suggestions and comments and stuff like that. I'm actually very proud of anything I write. |
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Post by GWGreturns on Jan 1, 2004 11:14:12 GMT -5
Well, it's not exactly Mata Nui vs. Makuta. Instead, it's sort of a "how it all began" story. Here goes.....
In the time before all time, before even Mata Nui himself, there was but one being: the Kanohi. The Kanohi was one of unfathomable power and wisdom. He knew all there was to know and more. Even though he was all-powerful, he strived for something.....more than was out there. With his great knowledge, he created powerful elemental spirits capable of anything imaginable. But, they needed names. Seeing as he created them, the Kanohi decided to call them "Kanohis," properly enough. Using the universal language he had devised, he named the Kanohis after the elements they embodied. Thus, the Kanohi had created Kanohi Hau, Spirit of Shielding. Among the others were Kanohi Pakari, Spirit of Strengh; Kanohi Kaukau, Spirit of Water; Kanohi Miru, Spirit of Air; Kanohi Akaku, Spirit of Great Vision; and Kanohi Kakama, Spirit of Speed. However, in his search for something more, the Kanohi had accidentally unleashed a curse upon the whole of everything. It was called Kanohi Kraahkan, Spirit of Shadow. With its powers of darkness, the Kraahkan would be able to consume all. The only thing capable of overpowering the Kraahkan would be a spirit of an opposite element. The Kanohi's pondering of this resulted in Kanohi Avohkii, Spirit of Light. The "world" that the Kanohi had long inhabited was in darkness and despair. Though he had wished not, the only way to save himself and everything else was to cast away his creations to a place far, far away. The Kanohi had given the spirits physical incarnations and sent them away forever, where they would exist, hopefully, in peace for eternity. Thus, the story of everything begins.....
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Post by JCB on Jan 2, 2004 18:24:03 GMT -5
I'm not. I'm just open for suggestions and comments and stuff like that. I'm actually very proud of anything I write. I meant the sbject "The works of an insane intellectual." Why do you call youself "Insane"? Ok as for the story I'm about to give up on writing because everyone here is too good. You have written the best work yet though. |
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Post by GWGreturns on Jan 2, 2004 19:52:25 GMT -5
Ah, c'mon! It don't matter if you're bad at writing stuff. Just do it and people will like it. It's like that one movie: "If you build it, they will come." And if the Kraahkan has you down, the Avohkii will save you! Oh yeah, and thanks.
I call myself insane cuz I AM! Just in a good, intellectual way.
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Post by JCB on Jan 2, 2004 19:57:26 GMT -5
Thank you, I'll keep that in mind. Your welcome about the complements and I guess your right, it isn't always bad to be insane or crazy.
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Post by gotenks992 on Jan 2, 2004 23:32:52 GMT -5
Nice story.
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Post by ChaosLord on Jan 3, 2004 4:26:02 GMT -5
Well its a good start.
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Post by GWGreturns on Jan 3, 2004 9:59:04 GMT -5
Well, that was the beginning of a new sorta-loosely-connected Bionicle story. Expect more really soon!
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Post by ChaosLord on Jan 9, 2004 10:39:40 GMT -5
So when are you going to continue it?
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Post by GWGreturns on Jan 9, 2004 16:28:50 GMT -5
JEEZ! A thinkin' guy's gotta think!  Have we as the human race come to expect things so soon that if it does not come instantaneously that it is nothing but a heaping bag of loopeengerg(MY WORD! NOT YOURS!)? JEEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Have we as the human race come to expect things so soon that if it does not come instantaneously that it is nothing but a heaping bag of loopeengerg(MY WORD! NOT YOURS!)? JEEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!