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Post by ShadowMaster on Dec 31, 2003 4:17:12 GMT -5
Here is a song I wrote some days ago...I'm not very good at writing poetry so don't laugh if you don't like it or find it somehow amusing or stupid... "Solitude leads to anger" I'm singing that song but it's not what it used to be since you're not with me.
I'm kicking that stone but it's not fun at all for I'm again alone...*
I don't wanna breathe this air. I don't wanna feel this fear. I don't wanna wait so long. I don't wanna be so strong.
Now I'm filled with hater. You promised that you'd come later but you never did. I don't even care a bit.
I can do by myself I don't need you anymore like I've ever done before. Go away and don't return. I'll just stay and wait my turn...
What do you think about that one???
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Post by ChaosLord on Dec 31, 2003 12:37:44 GMT -5
You are not bad at this.It is a very nice song!
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Post by gotenks992 on Dec 31, 2003 13:38:53 GMT -5
Very nice Shadowmaster.
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Post by GWGreturns on Dec 31, 2003 17:32:34 GMT -5
Intellect is a very good thing and it's told me that you're a good songwriter.
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Post by JCB on Dec 31, 2003 17:35:41 GMT -5
Nice, I like it alot. You should write more.
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