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Post by JCB on Jan 22, 2004 16:53:22 GMT -5
Yes, but then I will have "Soon after that" repeated twice in one and the same paragraph. Am I missing something because I don't see where you would have that.
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Post by ShadowMaster on Jan 24, 2004 7:25:40 GMT -5
There isn't such thing but it will become like that if I change it.
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Post by JCB on Jan 24, 2004 17:06:10 GMT -5
Oh, ok. I understand. Personaly I think this story is fine but you asked for help.
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Post by ShadowMaster on Jan 25, 2004 11:49:46 GMT -5
That's because I thing it sounds awful. I'm not good at writing...
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Post by Gamemaniac on Jan 25, 2004 11:53:54 GMT -5
That's because I thing it sounds awful. I'm not good at writing... What do you mean?? You're a great writer.
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Post by ShadowMaster on Jan 25, 2004 12:28:05 GMT -5
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Post by ChaosLord on Jan 25, 2004 14:57:59 GMT -5
I think you are a good writer.You make very good stories in english, even though it is not your ordinary language.And he proof is that you won the competition.What makes you think you are not good?
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Post by gotenks992 on Jan 31, 2004 1:00:11 GMT -5
i think your a good writer as well SM.
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jeddahchap
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Post by jeddahchap on Jan 31, 2004 9:24:28 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] [/glow]
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Post by JCB on Jan 31, 2004 22:24:48 GMT -5
You are an awsome writer SM!!!
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Post by gotenks992 on Jan 31, 2004 22:34:58 GMT -5
Great job.
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Post by JCB on Feb 1, 2004 23:07:29 GMT -5
Ok it's official, SM and I think we each are bad writers but we also think the other one is a good writer so maybe I'll post some of my works.
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Post by ShadowMaster on Feb 2, 2004 7:54:25 GMT -5
You are an awsome writer SM!!! Thank you all. But I don't think I will write stories anymore... I just can't. maybe it's because of the school...
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Post by Gamemaniac on Feb 2, 2004 7:57:09 GMT -5
how do u do that writing sm,? the one with the black shading down to red one in your sig?
cool avatar sm. whaaaaayyyy coooool.
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Post by ShadowMaster on Feb 2, 2004 8:11:13 GMT -5
This is a combination of red and black letters, it's nothing special but it tricks the lies, doesn't it??? Try doing different things with the tags and you can get really good results.
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