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Post by JCB on Nov 14, 2003 19:11:44 GMT -5
It's the first time I've tried writting this kind of story. So can you give me ideas on what the date should be (note: one of the charactures has a SUV) and also, I need ideas on a powerful crimanal group. ;D
Ok the tipe of story is... well I guess it is a story about a man taking revenge on to crimanal powers. I don't know a name for it. I guess I could call it Revenge of the Ghost.
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Post by ChaosLord on Dec 5, 2003 18:07:04 GMT -5
This sounds like the getaway for PS2, where some criminals kill someone's wife, kidnap his kid, and force him to do jobs for them...and in the end he takes revenge.
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Post by gotenks992 on Dec 5, 2003 23:37:36 GMT -5
Well you could think of something
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Post by ChaosLord on Dec 6, 2003 4:41:55 GMT -5
So what kind of help do you need?
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Post by JCB on Dec 6, 2003 15:37:24 GMT -5
Well I need a lot of help but I think I could just post what I've got so far and Teo or anyone else can use it if they want. I realised I'm not a writer and I never will be. That doesn't stop me from writing something someone else could use to make a extremly good book. Do you think I should?
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Post by ChaosLord on Dec 7, 2003 4:23:36 GMT -5
Hey why not?Who knows, maybe you are good and you just don't know it.
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Post by ShadowMaster on Dec 7, 2003 13:47:46 GMT -5
Yep,you never know before you try.My stories are not very good but that would not stop me from writting them.So try it and post whatever comes to your mind.
Maybe only you think that your works are not good.
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Post by JCB on Dec 8, 2003 10:02:41 GMT -5
That would be suprising. My books that I do have are like movies with very few words.
Introduction
It’s 1990 and Frank Conroy is a normal guy. With brown hair, brown eyes and a well paying job. He lived a fairly normal life, until one Monday morning, he was driving to work when a car came up behind him and ran into his back end. Now Frank knew of his boss’ affair and his dealings with the drug ring but he didn’t realize that his boss’ wife’s affair with a high up guy in the Russian mob would force him to make a choice.
Well he made his choice, he was meeting with Chief of police Hendrickson to tell him everything. Well now he realized that he has to get away, so he drove his SUV off the rode and into the woods. As he was driving, he went into a muddy riverbed. He jumped out and started running as they got out and started after him. When they caught him, they were at a large swamp so they pulled out their knives, cut him up and threw the pieces in the swamp.
The revenge of the ghost
Now it is 1993 and Frank decided he was going to make those two groups that killed him pay. First he needed plan, so he set to work getting any thing useful. At first he thought it would be easy. Then he realized he couldn’t pick any thing up, so he set out to find a way to solve this problem.
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Post by GWGreturns on Dec 16, 2003 17:52:52 GMT -5
Kewl! Ya gotta love stories where the character's ghost gets revenge.
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Post by ChaosLord on Dec 20, 2003 5:54:16 GMT -5
That's a nice start for a story. ;D
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